Choice+Argument

This was probably my weakest essay of the bunch. Looking back, I did a horrible job of using the sources as proof for my topic and creating a solid argument. My thesis uses the words negatively, positively, and neutrally which aren't the best adverbs to describe the effects of technology and media. Looking back, my essay is not entertaining to read at all because I didn't create a good conversation within the argument. I also didn't use a counter argument or qualify in my essay. When I was addressing the positive outcomes of media influence, I do believe I did a good job in finding a recent yet universal example to support that claim. In my next essay, I will discuss the strategies I used to hopefully make this argument effective.